I almost can't believe I'm posting a finished main product myself. yep, the following is a quick timed version of my final product in its, to date, final version. enjoy x2!!! :
there is much to commend this, Stuart, but there are some issues that need to be addressed - the titles are too quick to read as the font is complicated, so either change the font or extend the length of time it is on screen - you might consider changing the title effect. I would expect there to be a slide that lets the audience know when to expect the film to be released - all part of hooking an audience in to a product. I do like the quote from Braveheart, but a teaser trailer has the purpose of offering the audience eager anticipation of what is to come. Would/should you include a famous acor/director? I like the voice over script.
the title font was actually recommended via audience feedback but in truth i never really it much. as such in the next edition i will mess around with the titles and get them back to how they were originally, as well as include the changes you mentioned here.
there is much to commend this, Stuart, but there are some issues that need to be addressed - the titles are too quick to read as the font is complicated, so either change the font or extend the length of time it is on screen - you might consider changing the title effect.
ReplyDeleteI would expect there to be a slide that lets the audience know when to expect the film to be released - all part of hooking an audience in to a product. I do like the quote from Braveheart, but a teaser trailer has the purpose of offering the audience eager anticipation of what is to come. Would/should you include a famous acor/director?
I like the voice over script.
the title font was actually recommended via audience feedback but in truth i never really it much. as such in the next edition i will mess around with the titles and get them back to how they were originally, as well as include the changes you mentioned here.
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