Once I completed the teaser and side projects I then showed my products to the select target audience, which is to say my fellow class mates. I did this because it would allow me to further fine tune my products to my target audience and would basically make my project better all round. I basically got together a mixture of my class mates, friends and an all flavoured assortment of adults, and then showed them a screening of my finished teaser. They liked it, but as with all initial drafts of future masterpieces, questions were asked and interesting points were raised. In a quick no nonsense summary, they said overall it was great but that there were a number of things that can be improved, which were:
Smoother editing between shots,
More (!) epic opening music
A different, better version of titles
Better placement of the voice over
So, with the audience advising, I went about carrying out the changes and then showed the new final, final product to my eager audience. They said they were very pleased with how it turned out and said that for what it is it was very good and that, in their opinion, there wasn’t much more that could be done to it or changed.
UPDATE: unfortunatly, i do not have the original. I simply modified it to my current version. sorry!!
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Did you save a copy of your first final draft? I would have liked to have seen the draft that the audience first saw and then the one with the changes. as always, it is important to show development.
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